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    3 pics of Brenda from Crystal Covergirl 2006

    Hi, these are 3 shots of a gal from a photo shooting contest I attended on the weekend. I'd appreciate any feedback as I am deciding which photos to submit that will give me a chance of winning. I'll try to post shots of two other gals later on. Thanks for any input.
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    Re: 3 pics of Brenda from Crystal Covergirl 2006

    I like the first one the other two the hair...... and the first one also has a better background.
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    Re: 3 pics of Brenda from Crystal Covergirl 2006

    I like the other set better but I think you have too much space above the head. You should crop it out.
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    Re: 3 pics of Brenda from Crystal Covergirl 2006

    Thanks for the input and suggestions, guys.
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    Re: 3 pics of Brenda from Crystal Covergirl 2006

    Of these three, the first image looks best to me but I would up the exposure a little in PS. The other two photographs the models hair looks oily. The shooting angle in the first image is a little lower than the next two. She isn't looking up at the camera so she looks more natural.

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    Re: 3 pics of Brenda from Crystal Covergirl 2006

    Difficult to say which is best. The first is a tad dark and the second is, to me, a little too bright. The third may be the best, but I also chime in that there is too much negative space above her head and it needs to be cropped out.

    Also, make sure you sharpen them a little first. The eyes should be the sharpest pt in the photo.
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    Re: 3 pics of Brenda from Crystal Covergirl 2006

    Thanks Jim and GB for the tips.
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    Re: 3 pics of Brenda from Crystal Covergirl 2006

    Did you try any full body shots?
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    Re: 3 pics of Brenda from Crystal Covergirl 2006

    Quote Originally Posted by manacsa
    Did you try any full body shots?
    manacsa, no full body shots this time (at least nothing I recall intentionally doing - I may have been too far for a face shot at times but I don't think I had any full body ones) ... I recall the winning shots last year were all face shots so I went that way this year.

    There's a fashion show this coming weekend so I will probably attempt some full body shots.
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