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  1. 09-15-2010, 07:23 PM #1
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    family love

    haven't been around in a while...been busy with work and my "business". some of the latest: critique away...





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  2. 09-16-2010, 08:46 AM #2
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    Re: family love

    I like the 2nd shot, it's well done. I wish it was a landscape crop with all their bodies showing. infact looking at these and the 'weakness' that unifies them all is the cut off limbs and body parts. I think they would've been better had you included the entire scene. having said that, all the colours are nice and vibrant. great DOF and focus
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  3. 09-16-2010, 08:52 AM #3
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    Re: family love

    I'm for #1 - the eye follows their eyes to the kid and his eyes are on us. I think the backgrounds hurt the other two. - Terry
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  4. 09-16-2010, 09:25 AM #4
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    Re: family love

    beautiful family.

    I agree with oldclicker... and in addition to that...

    #1 & #3 could use a strobe for fill since you have a nice highlight from the sun already.

    #2 the contrast of the grass is a bit distracting
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