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    The Factory

    I know the power lines are pretty bad in this but I took a second look and maybe it helps a little?
    What do you think?


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    Re: The Factory

    Quote Originally Posted by xsport652
    I know the power lines are pretty bad in this but I took a second look and maybe it helps a little?
    What do you think?
    I dig the colors and the numerous sillhouettes. I think that your exposure is right on. Unfortunatelly, there are the powers line as you have said... It's just too bad that they were in the way.

    Seb

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    Re: The Factory

    Would have been a great image without the powerlines, but it still works for me.
    It is a very graphic image so the powerlines dont bother me as much. Nice composition and color.

    Nice job.
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    Re: The Factory

    I don't mind the powerlines, definitely bring across the blue collared work types of America. That sky is brilliant and the various mechanical and arcitechtual shots are great!

    Great shot, thanks for posting!

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    Re: The Factory

    I normally try to avoid powerlines like the plauge, but I don't mind them in this image. For me it adds to the "industrial" feel of the scene. I also love the colors. The image does seem to be leaning just a tad bit to the right tho, but that is a simple fix.
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    Re: The Factory

    I like it..The powerlines are a fact with industrial landscapes..I like the strong sillhouettes and the dark base gives the image something to sit on..You have managed to keep all verticles verticle..The sky makes it..

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