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    Re: Exercycle

    Pretty cool portrait. I like the mechanics stethoscope hanging over his neck . . .
    Is he a mechanic in his shop?
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    Re: Exercycle

    What a great character study! So nice and sharp too. The vignetting works very well.

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    Re: Exercycle

    oh WOW! His eyes are so hypnotizing. Fantastic color scheme. I love the authentic rusticness of it. Superb photo!!! I am in awe!

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    Thanks guys.

    Mechanic? Sort of. But more like a mad scientist. This was in his "workspace."

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    Great shot Dray........your portraits are always so impressive........I dont see anything wrong with the sharpness.........lol
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    Re: Exercycle

    He does appear a bit balmy! Great character study and use of props. Processing is spot-on as well.

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    Where do I know him from? What was your lighting set up? He looks like a country singer from the 70's. Mac something????
    I know Mac Davis.
    No critique. Absolutely awesome.
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    Re: Exercycle

    sweet portrait

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    Re: Exercycle

    Awesome as usual.
    Is it out of line to ask for a little insight towards your pp technique...plugin's or what have you?
    mostly Nikon gear

    Feel free to edit my images for critique, just let me know what you did.

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    Re: Exercycle

    That is spot on sharp, I could probably pixel peep that whole image and not find any negatives.

    Not a fan of the vignetting though. Would be nice to see his hand too since they just crop off and not fade out.

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    Re: Exercycle

    Great job Seth. Really awesome this one, no critiques at all.
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    Re: Exercycle

    Thanks all.

    Vic - lol good! Glad to get the Sharpness Seal Of Approval from one who can only be referred to as the Sharpness King.

    Greg - lol. Einstein with (I think) large Octabank high, left, some kind of speedlight bouncing off the wall, right, and I think I was using a barebulb speedlight behind him at a low output. It's all very hazy, though. It was awhile ago and wasn't quite in my right mind during that shoot.

    2434 - I was wondering about that. It's been awhile (October of last year) and I don't remember if this was as shot or cropped. If cropped, my guess is that there was a good reason (distractions, etc.). But I do see what you mean. I think the intent behind the vignette and crop would have been to draw more attention to his face.

    n8 - my workflow is, thankfully, constantly changing. I do remember that I wanted a Dragan feel here and that I used curves on monochromatic contrast, selective color (for the blacks, mostly), and a couple textures. I'm trying to get away from the contrasty, "black-blacks" kind of look, but it seemed to suit this subject pretty well.

    Liban, Phil, and Clay - thanks!

    I was wondering if I need to bring his hat back in at the top, instead of having it fade out? And if that bright spot underneath his left leg needs fixing? And... now that I'm looking at it again.. whether that little shadow spot above his upper lip is a problem...

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    Re: Exercycle

    Love this shot Dray. Somehow it inexplicably conjures up images of Gene Wilder as Will Wonka
    I think the color burn vignette works exceedingly well here.

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    Re: Exercycle

    Quote Originally Posted by jetrim
    Love this shot Dray. Somehow it inexplicably conjures up images of Gene Wilder as Will Wonka
    I think the color burn vignette works exceedingly well here.
    LOL! I was thinking the same!

    Thanks jet.

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    Re: Exercycle

    I keep on coming back to this photo. I also thought of Gene Wilder! I simply love how you captured a whimsical somewhat childlike charm in this. It makes me think of carnivals. I wish I could fave this photo. Admire your talent!

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    Re: Exercycle

    Quote Originally Posted by ScapeGrace
    I keep on coming back to this photo. I also thought of Gene Wilder! I simply love how you captured a whimsical somewhat childlike charm in this. It makes me think of carnivals. I wish I could fave this photo. Admire your talent!
    Thanks, Scape!

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