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Thread: Cabana Shot

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    Cabana Shot

    All criticism welcome on how I could have improved this shot!


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    Re: Cabana Shot

    I think just a tighter crop to take out the roof; just the blue cushions and all of your beautiful model would be great.

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    Re: Cabana Shot

    I agree. Get rid of the ceiling but also pay attention to the he edges of your photo. The partial knee and the clipped hand needs to be addressed. Her left hand would've been nice resting on her face. The knee should either be totally gone or more apparent.

    IMO of course....thanks for sharing.
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