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    Re: Warrior

    Nice tones - only minor critique which is I would have prepared graeter separation between head and wall or eaven his head against the wall to make his hair stand out further.

    But I like it as is.

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    Re: Warrior

    I like the image but the carpal tunnel velcro wrist guard seems out of place.

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    Re: Warrior

    Good point Roger, that's the first thing I thought about upon viewing this. What makes it even harder to take this way for me, is that his hair was tied in a nice knot that would've looked very good against the white wall.


    Jim,
    Nice attention to detail, I didn't even see that until you mentioned it.

    thanks guys.
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