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    Every Litter Bit Hurts

    Do you think I should have had him not look at the litter as he walked by? Or does this make a statement of its own?

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    Re: Every Litter Bit Hurts

    I think the looking at it makes the statement.
    Would have been neat if you'd got a shot of him picking it up and then disposing of it.
    Sort of a series.
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    Re: Every Litter Bit Hurts

    I have to agree with frog.
    the whole walking by and not doing anything hurts this picture.

    other than that I like it.

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    Re: Every Litter Bit Hurts

    I don't think the walk by hurts it - very appropriate comment. The normal all talk; no walk. – TF
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    Re: Every Litter Bit Hurts

    Quote Originally Posted by OldClicker
    I don't think the walk by hurts it - very appropriate comment. The normal all talk; no walk. – TF
    I agree, that is just what I was thinking.

    Bummer there were other people in the shot. Might work to crop some off the right?
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    Re: Every Litter Bit Hurts

    okay, I cropped different to get rid of the extra people and add more sidewalk (and litter). Better? Worse? No Difference?
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    Re: Every Litter Bit Hurts

    Not sure if its better.
    I would crop some from the bottom about two thirds up to his feet
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