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Thread: Inside out

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    Inside out

    What do you guys think? I'm happy with it but I feel like its missing a little something that I can't put my finger on.


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    Re: Inside out

    I cant give you a lot of technical stuff but i like the sharpness,color and the way my eyes are led around the photo
    Just 1 noob's opinion
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    Re: Inside out

    Wider angle?
    The little bit of greenery at the bottom hints that there's something more interesting down there. But the leaves at the top of the tree look rather sparse, is there more up there too?
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    Re: Inside out

    Quote Originally Posted by SmartWombat
    Wider angle?
    The little bit of greenery at the bottom hints that there's something more interesting down there. But the leaves at the top of the tree look rather sparse, is there more up there too?
    The greenery at the bottom is the top of a distant tree, if I would of gotten more of the tree to the right in the photo my arm would of been in frame and I would of lost some of the left wall. I had to stick one arm down a crack in the outside and guess what was going to be in frame. I have a few other exposures but they are either bland or don't have much detail because I had the flash off for some of them.

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    Re: Inside out

    I'd clone out that distant tree on the bottom otherwise it looks great to me, what lens was this used on? I'm looking for a good wide angle myself, struggling between the 14 mm L, the 11-16 2.8 tokina or just keeping with the 10-20 sigma f4.

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    Re: Inside out

    Then if there's nothing wider than this, I'd clone out the bit of green at the bottom.
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    Re: Inside out

    Quote Originally Posted by Kajuah
    I'd clone out that distant tree on the bottom otherwise it looks great to me, what lens was this used on? I'm looking for a good wide angle myself, struggling between the 14 mm L, the 11-16 2.8 tokina or just keeping with the 10-20 sigma f4.
    Its the kit lens that came with my 20D, efs 18-55mm. I'll clone out the tree at the bottom and repost the updated image later tonight when I get home.

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