Early morning...

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  • 10-28-2006, 08:55 PM
    GB1
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    Early morning...
    Took these about 3 weeks ago in San Diego. Left a little early for work to get the sun coming up...

    Not sure how I could have made these better?

    Kodachrome film

    GB
  • 10-29-2006, 04:35 AM
    MB1
    Re: Early morning...
    I would like to see more sky and more image to the right of the pier. Plus I think the horizon is too near the center of the image. Perhaps a wider angle lens.

    OTOH there is great mood and color in these images. Go into work early more often!
  • 10-29-2006, 06:22 AM
    Alison
    Re: Early morning...
    Beautiful GB. I particular love the movement of the fishermen in #1 but equally I love the motionless silhouettes of the fishermen in #2.
    Great images :thumbsup:
  • 10-29-2006, 06:25 AM
    Greg McCary
    Re: Early morning...
    Good work GB. I like the second. It's a very soothing picture. It was worth leaving early for sure. The lamp post sets it off...
    Greg
  • 10-29-2006, 07:58 PM
    GB1
    Re: Early morning...
    MB - I see what you mean about the horizon being so centered... I guess I really wanted those pilars in there. Yeah, maybe a wide angle would have worked better.

    Easy to get a reshoot any time I want, though you cant predict the color.

    THks Alison. I lean towards the stationary fishermen myself. The blur almost seems like a mistake (?)

    Greg - Do you mean by set it off that the lamppost doesnt belong there?

    GB
  • 10-29-2006, 08:01 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: Early morning...
    No, I think it's in the perfect spot. The first one seems a little to centered, but that's just me. I also love the perfect exposure. I would have blown it out for sure..