Diner

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I like the idea of the color shot of black and white objects, I think the server in the left top corner and the little bit of green table on the bottom right distract from the pattern of black and white. Also, it seems like it is a little bit slanted with the right side a smidge low.

Hi Don,

Nice shot. I'd crop off the left into the black of the counter and then lighten the the people sitting at the table on the end. If necessary crop up to remove the foreground table or none of the above.

Cheers,

Jim B.

Good suggestions. I like the idea of lightening the people especially.