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    Scissor-tailed flycatcher #001

    I shot this picture this past Sunday using my new EOS 20D and EF 100-400 IS lens. I was pleased that I was actually able to get close to them as in the past they have always stayed far enough away that I would have to REALLY crop to get a shot like this.

    Just to add a little more information about this one. When I spotted him he was out in a field beyond a barbed-wire fence. I walked off the trail I was on and up to the fence to take the shot. Let me tell you that I have never seen as many mosquitoes as I saw while I was trying to get a picture of this guy. There were literally hundreds covering me even though I had a very large amount of DEET on me. I even had them biting the inside of my nose if you can believe that. Overall I think it was worth it as I really love these flycatchers.

    Greg
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    Re: Scissor-tailed flycatcher #001

    I think this is a great shot that would benefit from a visit to curves as it's very flat at the moment. Also a crop to take the bird from the central position would improve the composition I feel. Beautiful background etc.
    Fred...

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    Re: Scissor-tailed flycatcher #001

    For me the focus of the image is already off center and I do very much like the yellow color from the flowers on the left side of the image. I wonder what exactly you would do in curves, maybe if you could show me an example that would help.

    Thanks,

    Greg

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    Re: Scissor-tailed flycatcher #001

    Ultimately any critique is subject to personal preference. What I see as desirable you may not. Anyway this is how I would have finished this image off.
    Fred...
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    Re: Scissor-tailed flycatcher #001

    I think you are right, the curves did help. Here's my version.

    Thanks,

    Greg
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    Re: Scissor-tailed flycatcher #001

    Nice picture, it the coloring is good and its like softer now since u messed with the curves
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