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Thread: Crayons

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    Crayons (fixed)

    Ummm, I don't know!
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    Re: Crayons

    I love this concept, yet it seems a tad soft (did you use a tripod?) and also a tad dark. I'd think it would be beneficial to saturate the colors a bit to really make them pop! Nice shot and a great idea,

    Jared

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    Re: Crayons

    This was in wal-mart's parking lot, next to my car. has been through rain an cars runnin over it, maybe that explains the soft look, maybe it is soft. The colors i will try to play with.

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    Re: Crayons

    payn817...brighten this one up a tad and i think it will work. this is a great subject a great find and a good shot. i might even say a little more sharpening might help.

    todd

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    Re: Crayons (fixed)

    Great color razzle dazzle..! I agree that it's a tad bit soft (tripod might have helped). The only think I don't like is the bottom left part of the photo that doesn't have any crayons.

    Reminds me of when I was a kid and the world was still new and shiney ... before conceptual stuff took over

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    Re: Crayons

    Maybe it hasn't and won't suffer any more damage before morning. So i can try to reshoot after work. Thanks for the comments everyone.

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