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    Two Friends Fooling Around

    18-55 mm Nikkor. Top Mounted Flash. Adjusted in Photo Suite.
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    Re: Two Friends Fooling Around

    Nice capture. I'm not really fond of the effects put on it, though. I think a nice, crisp shot would look better.

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    Re: Two Friends Fooling Around

    The ordinary shot was boring. This was a happy accident.

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    Re: Two Friends Fooling Around

    Okay. That was just my opinion.

    Have you tried black and white?

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    Re: Two Friends Fooling Around

    Agree with Ever. Its a nice candid, spontaneous shot. The excess of effects, saturation etc, takes away from what the real main theme should be...two friends. Not two persons seating at the cafeteria surrounded by....a psychedelic environment...thats just my opinion of course.

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    Re: Two Friends Fooling Around

    I doubt that's a boring shot. Can you post the original?
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    Re: Two Friends Fooling Around

    the original
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    Re: Two Friends Fooling Around

    I agree with you Don, something had to be done and I do like it compared to the original.
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    Re: Two Friends Fooling Around

    I think (and you guys might disagree) you sometimes have to take a photo out of this world to make it work.

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    Re: Two Friends Fooling Around

    I would really like to see this photo in black and white. I think it would look better that way because it is kind of an old (for lack of a better word) type setting. Maybe it is the color that is stealing the effect of the picture. Good job on capturing the candid shot.
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    Re: Two Friends Fooling Around

    top shot is better don for sure the only thing i do not like is the fuss around the subjects.

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    Re: Two Friends Fooling Around

    Call it a cartoon. But look at the sharpness. You can see the veins in the man's hand.

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