On The Darkside

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  • 03-13-2010, 10:34 AM
    IVAN ZEITLIN
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    On The Darkside
    A Self Portrait And Lighting Test.
  • 03-13-2010, 10:40 AM
    draymorton
    Re: On The Darkside
    Doesn't look like Southside Johnny to me. :D

    Great idea, but I think it might be more effective with partial desaturation.

    The lighting is also a little hot next the right eye and to the right of your nose.
  • 03-13-2010, 12:14 PM
    DLB1973
    Re: On The Darkside
    nice striking idea. I agree with the comments from draymorton but would like to say "good job", you are on the right path!
  • 03-14-2010, 03:29 AM
    IVAN ZEITLIN
    Re: On The Darkside
    Thanks Guys I'll Give It Another Try..
  • 03-14-2010, 04:35 AM
    shootme
    Re: On The Darkside
    Great idea for a shot. From my screen it looks a little blurred so I'd have had it sharper at least on his right eye where there is more light. Some smoke coming up from say a cigarette could have added some dimension for the gangster look.
  • 03-14-2010, 05:09 AM
    jetrim
    Re: On The Darkside
    Interesting idea, and pretty well executed. The hot spot doesn't bother me, and I think you could probably avoid having to desaturate by making a white balance shift to a cooler temp. (more blue) maybe 6500k. The only thing that really bothers me about this is the shadow the nose casts on the left side of the face. A paper plate reflector bouncing just a little bit of light back down into the left eye socket would do wonders here and give a similar range of tones to what's shown on the other side only not as bright.