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    Fashion/Glamor: Shakinah

    c & c appreciated



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    Re: Fashion/Glamor: Shakinah

    the one on the very bottom right, I would have preferred with her hands in her pockets.

    Ok seriously, she's looking straight at you in all of them, I guess that accounts for continuity in a collage, but I think some variety of eyes would have been preferred for me. She also seems to have a rather mild expression in all of them. Third down third over looks a bit hazy, maybe the light was angled with the lens in just a certain way, or maybe it was intentional.

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    Re: Fashion/Glamor: Shakinah

    Quote Originally Posted by Anbesol
    the one on the very bottom right, I would have preferred with her hands in her pockets.

    Ok seriously, she's looking straight at you in all of them, I guess that accounts for continuity in a collage, but I think some variety of eyes would have been preferred for me. She also seems to have a rather mild expression in all of them. Third down third over looks a bit hazy, maybe the light was angled with the lens in just a certain way, or maybe it was intentional.
    thanks... these are just selected images from 250 images... so there's a lot of variety and poses...it so happens I picked those and like them.

    yes I like the flare (flash reflection hitting here dress to my camera... doesn't have to be clear all the time.)... adds interest to me.

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    Re: Fashion/Glamor: Shakinah

    very nice series, beautiful model

    excellent light

    her face looks a lot better slightly sideways than straight facing the camera

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    Re: Fashion/Glamor: Shakinah

    Much better choice of model
    mostly Nikon gear

    Feel free to edit my images for critique, just let me know what you did.

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    Re: Fashion/Glamor: Shakinah

    Quote Originally Posted by n8
    Much better choice of model
    well this was from a modelling agency.. the last one was just from a website and she looked really good in the port... very very deceiving. Now I ask for unedited and recent head shots and full body shot.

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