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    Curtain Call....Theatre pt. 4

    These ending scene is very emotional, with the character on the right being very angered by ongoing issues. Does this work? I'm sorry I started four different threads, but I do want each shot individually critiqued as some of them might be used as the actors personal shots to keep from the play.

    Do you like?

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    Re: Curtain Call....Theatre pt. 4

    Well he is certainly angry, you have captured that well but I feel the lack of response on the expression of the other actor totally nullifies the sense of emotion you are trying to portray.

    I have taken a look at all 4 threads now, I think #1 is the best shot to use and the expressions in #2 are also great.

    Hope that helps

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    Re: Curtain Call....Theatre pt. 4

    I like the fact that you captured the actor with his mouth open and his body position, the other actor I can't decided whether she is scared or just wondering about something. Photographically it was the right moment for the male actor and the dark background suit picture. The only thing I would change (if i could) was to ask the female actress to show more interest.

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    Re: Curtain Call....Theatre pt. 4

    Herriot - Thanks for the words and taking the time to look at all four pictures. I appreciate your deidcation to look at all four and tell me which ones you like. The girl's face changed just after this actually, but the shot I have with that went blurry.

    Bajan - Thanks for the comments, most of the curtain in the back was black, so it added some nice affect for the pictures. I agree about the female actress, thanks for the words!

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