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    Come fly with me

    I don't know about this one. A bit of a blah. let me know what you think.

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    Re: Come fly with me

    Liban,

    I'm not sure where this is, but it's an interesting area.

    Does the image work? I think it falls short in the composition category. I know the fence structure is the subject and the vanishing point is interesting, but I don't think it's strong enough to be the subject, and the building on the right is cut off. Everything else is sort of too small to matter. I guess this one falls into the 'interesting pieces' bin (I have a lot of those too!).

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    Edit - btw, you asked if it is too blah.. I sort of like the dark, contrasty look to it. Reminds me of inclement weather.
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    Re: Come fly with me

    Thanks GB.

    Asmarlak on the gallery forum shot almost the same scene and wow. now I know for sure this one is a blah. lol. check this out. totally awesome, he nailed it. My time of shooting was very different but it's really amazing how he well captured the scene there.

    http://gallery.photographyreview.com...&ppuser=257353

    compared to that, mine is a muddy pile of dog poo. haha.
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