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    Biomedical Research Building

    Taken downtown. Comments?


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    Re: Biomedical Research Building

    pretty cool building...just to mess around i cloned out the lower left above walkway down to the steps...made the entrance more pronounced and cleaned it up like the other lines of building..just a thought. then maybe use that little tree down there to fill in arrea underneath? or not.

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    Re: Biomedical Research Building

    Good suggestions there, mate. I'll try some of them and post an edit later.

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    Re: Biomedical Research Building

    this is a real crude version of what i was talking about...would need much more detail than i gave it

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    Re: Biomedical Research Building

    I see. Thanks for posting it
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    Re: Biomedical Research Building

    I like the entrance and the columns to kind of hold down the base...you could even go down to the stairs angling to the left and it would really declutter and pronounce the entry...

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    Re: Biomedical Research Building

    I think the tilt is distracting. You should make the side of the building parallel to the frame. It's also a dark and gloomy photo which doesn't enhance the architecture.

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