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I agree with the above poster about the effectiveness of the foreground plants - very nice. There are dark areas around the plants against the lighter places in the background - post processing? - Terry
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I am no better than you. I critique to teach myself to see.
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Feel free to edit my photos or do anything else that will help me learn.
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Sony/Minolta - way more gear than talent.
Thanks for all your comments. The post processing is responsible for both the darkness of the plants in general as well as the "halo" around the plants. I will try toning it down and little and post the results.
I was trying to add something a bit more dramatic to the shot than just some plants and a dock, but I may have taken it too far.
This is the original shot with just a bit of adjustment to the exposure and contrast:
This is a version that used the same kind of effect as the first one I posted but just toned down a little. I started from scratch so the crop is not exactly the same.
Edit: I think the last one was too hastily done. I really need to revisit
I think I still like the first one I posted, but there may still be a happy medium between the first and the last.
The first one is definitely dramatic, unfortunately I am immediately drawn to the halos around the plants and the overall dreamy softness. I like the drama of the sky in the first one and the realism of the unprocessed version. Maybe increase the saturation in the yellows and oranges a bit.
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love the colour of the 1st image and the crispness of the 2nd. I agree with Don who made the remark about not caring for the silhoutteing. and seeing your original, those greens are nice addition to the photo
Liban
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I still lie everything about the first one except the halos - including that I didn't notice the dock. - Terry
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I am no better than you. I critique to teach myself to see.
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Feel free to edit my photos or do anything else that will help me learn.
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Sony/Minolta - way more gear than talent.