Quick Sweep

[starriderrick]

Hard to go slow on this road.Sweeper #1. I never park like this!. Here is a very rough draft of an idea....
Copy, paste 1203cc,100 ft./lbs torque. This is a 10mm shot as opposed to the Long sweeper (75mm)The W/A might be an improvement.This capture was framed as is, not cropped. I thought the B / W worked as well if not better. Your thoughts?
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Image 3 is the 180 perspective to show the harsh lighting.

Finally, 2 questions about the composition of image #1. (reshoot tips)
1.The near 50/50 horizon placement... does it work?
2. Since there is a foreground element... will the left side framing work or go full guard rail ? Thanks again for the advice.

Rick