• 06-07-2004, 04:28 PM
    natatbeach
    1 Attachment(s)
    bubbles,birds and buildings
    Took this in Boston at the Gathering...the birds against the bright sky and flowy clouds and the different layers of glass from the globes---I thought it made for a good shot...taken with the g500 (point and shoot.... 5MP) in BW mode...

    All critiques and opinions welcome
  • 06-07-2004, 05:25 PM
    bjtindle
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by natatbeach
    Took this in Boston at the Gathering...the birds against the bright sky and flowy clouds and the different layers of glass from the globes---I thought it made for a good shot...taken with the g500 (point and shoot.... 5MP) in BW mode...

    All critiques and opinions welcome

    I really like this one nat. It if definitely unique! I can't think of a thing you would/could do to it to make it better in any way. Wonderful shot.

    Betty
  • 06-07-2004, 05:59 PM
    natatbeach
    penny and betty? do you guys think it's too dark? it's not quite a silhouette but it is...only thing that I wondered about...thnaks for looking and liking and the encouragement:)

    and betty I owe you some critiques---I think you have a real eye for this and I really love your enthusiasm...

    and Penny- I see your photography is starting to reach another level (hope that sounds right) kinda like Ray's it was here then it went to there and his images have changed in a pretty amazing way and I see oyurs starting to do that which is so cool. I just would love to see more BW ( i think you have a gift there that's a bit unused)
  • 06-07-2004, 06:17 PM
    Sean Dempsey
    I like it alot. I do not think it is too dark.

    What strikes me is the sky, and the birds near total blackness. IMO the sky is the subject, and the birds/spheres are the "spice", you know? Just my opinion. GREAT shot.
  • 06-07-2004, 06:33 PM
    bjtindle
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by natatbeach
    penny and betty? do you guys think it's too dark? it's not quite a silhouette but it is...only thing that I wondered about...thnaks for looking and liking and the encouragement:)

    and betty I owe you some critiques---I think you have a real eye for this and I really love your enthusiasm...

    and Penny- I see your photography is starting to reach another level (hope that sounds right) kinda like Ray's it was here then it went to there and his images have changed in a pretty amazing way and I see oyurs starting to do that which is so cool. I just would love to see more BW ( i think you have a gift there that's a bit unused)

    A tad too dark but not so much that I can't enjoy it! :) I love it. Thank you for the nice comments too! Please feel free to check out anything of mine.
  • 06-07-2004, 07:51 PM
    gahspidy
    I like this one as well , Nat. I do think it is a bit dark, but nothing you could'nt boost up a bit in photoshop. Great composition and definetely a Natalie signature shot.
  • 06-07-2004, 08:10 PM
    natatbeach
    when boosted up
    you see a WHOLE lot more of the drippy bird turds too many to clone out LOL
    thnaks for your kind words :D
  • 06-07-2004, 08:12 PM
    natatbeach
    nice qoute...
    It reminds me of this pic and the fact it was taken with a point and shoot and most of my images that were better came from by Minolta ---not the Nikon (maybe I should start reading the manual :D)

    thnaks for taking the time to look
  • 06-08-2004, 06:21 AM
    Elysian
    Not bad, but too much clutter; I'm overwhelmed by all the different elements and the clear backgroud doesn't help either. The composition is good, but the pigeons don't do it for me.
    A shot without the pigeons and distracting background against an interesting sky would have had more impact in my opinion. I would like to see a more abstract shot, instead of a "pigeons on a lamp" snap shot, because that's kinda what it is.
    Just my $0,02

    Thanks for sharing
  • 06-08-2004, 06:35 AM
    natatbeach
    I have to tell ya...
    I'm always hesitant to read what your replies are but I learn a lot from them...you will never be accused of not being honest :D

    I appreciate your thoughts on this one and it's a shot that can easily be reshot...so I will tack it to my to redo list... Thanks for your thoughts they were worth more than two cents :)
  • 06-08-2004, 07:27 AM
    darkrainfall
    I like this shot, it's very different and interesting. The black and white gives it an old movie feel imo. And, as said before, it definitely is a Natalie signature shot.
  • 06-08-2004, 08:03 AM
    Chunk
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by natatbeach
    I'm always hesitant to read what your replies are but I learn a lot from them...you will never be accused of not being honest :D

    I appreciate your thoughts on this one and it's a shot that can easily be reshot...so I will tack it to my to redo list... Thanks for your thoughts they were worth more than two cents :)

    Then you probably don't want to hear my comments either. :)

    You caught a good shot here that many of us would have walked by. I have to agree with the "too cluttered" feel but my solution would be to crop out the lower 1/3 or 1/4 to an almost square image. I like the birds.

    Good work..you are giving us a lot of stuff to think about.