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  1. 10-11-2012, 05:26 PM #1
    Tyson L. Sparks
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    Senior portrait 2

    Good comments on the first one, what can I do better, all comments welcome.


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  2. 10-12-2012, 04:56 PM #2
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    Re: Senior portrait 2

    I like the blurred background and the sharpness of the subject. Lighting is nice and it a very clear picture. It will make a nice senior picture.

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    Re: Senior portrait 2

    I prefer this one to the other one. Very good eye contact and smile. DOF is very good. Nice separation from background. very sharp. My only problem is the space above her head. I think it's too much. Maybe crop half way down to her head would balance it out and make her even more important in the shot. Right now she looks very low in the frame.
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  4. 10-13-2012, 02:13 PM #4
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    Re: Senior portrait 2

    Thank you for comments

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