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    Member Lou Frasier's Avatar
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    Sky over Loyola university this morning.

    I was delivering some glass panels from fremont california and had this quick opportunity to take this one,I had no time to to even adjust any settings,what do you think .I did lighten it up in photoshop a bit though, here it is one more timelightened and cropped,sorry if the pic is really big.
    Last edited by Lou Frasier; 01-19-2009 at 10:57 PM.
    whens the next trackday,

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    Re: Sky over Loyola university this morning.

    Interesting composition.
    I think you should crop most of the foreground if you can't lighten it.
    If you can enough to bring out some detail, it would be fine.
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    Re: Sky over Loyola university this morning.

    Cool sunset, but I agree w/ Frog. Probably best to lose everything below the roof top of the building on the right in the foregound, it would leave you with a nice panoramic.

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    Re: Sky over Loyola university this morning.

    thanks guys,much appreciated,I am gonna mess with ti for a little tonight,hopefully tomorrow I can get some good one of candlestick park when I am in brisbane,
    whens the next trackday,

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