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I think you could crop quite a bit off the left and bottom (just leave a touch of window frame and sill). I really like the shadow of the screen on the bird.
Very nice shot. You must keep your camera pretty close by! I love the diagonal line that leads the eye from the bottom right corner to the bird. As previously mentioned by MB1, interesting pattern formed by the screen.
Robert
This is one of those shots where the moment and setting can make up for any technical problems. The focus seems to be on a point just beyond the eyes and the image could use to be cropped as suggested. The setting and the shadow of the screen makes this a moody and interesting scene.