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    Beach work

    Comments are welcome.

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    Re: Beach work

    Great Shots I Love How Clear And Focused They Are I Like The 3rd One How You Focused Right Threw The Steering Wheel.

    Great Shots
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    Re: Beach work

    i love the shots, but i guess my question is, are you having this as 1 shot, or 3? cuase a part of me thinks they might look better seperated rather than in the same frame

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    Re: Beach work

    I am not all that sure what your point is here Seb?
    Please explain.
    The point where all three frames intersect, creates a wierd line for me, it's like an optical illusion that hurts my eyes.
    I think I can see where you are going, so I would think these would be more effective separately rather than how you have it.
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    Re: Beach work

    Interesting... At first I thought it was one shot.

    I like the left shot the best. But then again, just construction on the beach, which is a little painful to see But the final results are usually worth it. -GB
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    Re: Beach work

    J-Dogg: Thanks for commenting.

    mondo1090: Well actually I was heading for this piece as a single shot. I felt like trying something different for me. Thanks.

    mtbrian: Honnestly, there is no real point lol... I wanted to try a different presentation for a small series. I am now thinking that they would look better if separated. Thanks.

    GB1: Thanks! Actually, there wasn't any construction there (at that point). That piece of machinery was left unused near a country road.


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    Re: Beach work

    I like this image alot... i think it tells a story, and that everything fits perfect for this image

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