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I was thinking about Frog's image below that shows a child from the back and wondering if I had ever taken a shot from that perspective that works. Here is one I thought of and found in the files. It is from 2001 and is so old was shot on film and scanned from the print on a flatbed scanner.

I would love to hear your comments and critiques and thoughts on why it works or doesn't work.

from 2001? I can tell from the colours. :p

Just kidding, but it does have a vintage look!

So, it looks like there's some water splash involved? I can see drops in the forground by his right leg, but ti's not apparent in the rest of the shot. If there was some sprinkler action, i would've liked it to be more visible. I don't like that the feet are cut off. I have no clue what he's carrying. And for those reasons it doesn't really work for me. I hope that helped!