From my first set with a real flash unit. She was amazingly patient, letting me take a ton of shots before she had had enough. I posted the original in ViewFinder Lucy, then took some advice and converted to b&w, added a little sharpening. I like it enough now to submit it for your critique. I'm a rookie - be brutal. I want to get better!


(Some fun crops are in the ViewFinder thread as well, but I wanted to pick just one image for critique)