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    atrium

    Our office building, as I left to go home.
    I thought I'd give the LZ5 a hard time

    Now, what do you think of the results?
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    Re: atrium

    It's way too dark, even for my taste. It's soft too, either its not in focus or its blurry.Try an HDR next time. You'll get all the details to pop out.
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    Re: atrium

    why the tilt on the first two..??.. i dont mind the dark factor.. its not too soft either..

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    Re: atrium

    We're seeing them in a different order.
    I felt the first was too square, despite the diagonal element from the lights over the lower walkway breaking it up.
    Second one the only vertical element is the right most support, and there's some more ceiling to balance the light from the office doors.
    So then I thought, why not disorient people completely? Bring in more ceiling to balance the office lights and lose the vertical completely.

    This is black cat in a coal cellar, so don't look for sharpness, it's not there. I'm asking way too much at this kind of exposure 1/40 f2.8 1600 ISO.

    Playing with it even more, is this going too far?
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