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    Say Hello To My Little Film
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    Fishy Looking Abstract

    Just wondering what everyone thinks of this. I think it's a pretty cool looking abstract formation on cement. I'd appreciate any comments about the composition or possible crops.
    This was taken with an EOS 1n, 50 f/1.4, on Fuji Velvia film. Any and all comments/critiques are welcome.

    -Nate
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    Nice!

    This is a really interesting abstraction you've created here. The only thing that bugs me is the little black spot at top left. I would crop that much off the left side, and an equal amount off the bottom to keep the proportions in check. I really like that one... a good study of color, line and texture in one shot.
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    Thanks for the comments. I also thought the black spot was a tad distracting but decided to leave it there to see what others think.

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