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Thread: Firefighter

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    Firefighter Tyson L. Sparks's Avatar
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    Firefighter

    Do you think I got a good shot here? I wanted to capture the moment, a man at work. The fire wasalmost out by the time I got there so there was no flames and smoke. The subject in the center is one of my fellow firefighters, I was late to the station so I ended up on the bandaid wagon. No one got hurt so I spent most of the time snapping beautiful pictures . When I am on the squad, well anyone for that matter, I like being bored. I have been to 3 fires where we had to take one of our own away. Not a good feeling.



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    Re: Firefighter

    Bump bump bump bump bump

    How can I be lost
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    Re: Firefighter

    Another well done action shot. There is a lot going on in a situation like this and you did a good job capturing the moment. The gentelmans expression on the right evevn looks like a fireman.
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    Re: Firefighter

    The Captain shouting out orders, or giving instruction !
    Try removing the individuals on the left side of the photo, they are not adding to the 'action' in the photo.
    The lack of full bunker gear on the fireman, and the 'clip board' detracts from the overall effect?
    . . . just my interpretation of what your portraying Tyson. :thumbsup:
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