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    Junior Member snpri3's Avatar
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    2 Different Photos

    Just messing around with my new Camera went out today and captured these 2 shots.

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    Sunset


    15 Seconds Exposure time
    80 ISO

    Rocky Fall



    12 Seconds Exposure time
    80 100 ISO

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    Re: 2 Different Photos

    You're on the right track with 'Rocky Fall', but you need a little more exposure on that----it's way too dark. As for 'Sunset', I really love the colors, but think you could crop a little off the left side of the shot. Those telepone wires disrupt an otherwise pristine sky. Your horizon's a little tilted to the left......needs straightening.
    Hope this helps.
    John

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    Re: 2 Different Photos

    Totally agree with John.
    Keep Shooting!

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    Re: 2 Different Photos

    That second one would look great if it were a little brighter. Although, it doesn't look bad.
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    Junior Member snpri3's Avatar
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    Re: 2 Different Photos

    Why thank you for the C&C , ill put those Tips into use next time.


    What about this one, a little more contrast


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