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  • 09-06-2008, 06:28 PM
    dl4449
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    1 more for consideration
    How could this be better??
    Thanks
    Troy

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  • 09-06-2008, 08:06 PM
    Frog
    Re: 1 more for consideration
    good focus on the gull..crop most of the right as it doesn't seem to do anything for the pic.
  • 09-06-2008, 08:11 PM
    dl4449
    Re: 1 more for consideration
    Thanks Frog
  • 09-07-2008, 02:30 AM
    SmartWombat
    Re: 1 more for consideration
    Crop from the right and someone else will say it's too centred :)
    Another person will way it suits a square crop.

    What stands out to me is the overexposure on the back of the neck/head
    And the focus on the beak rather than the eye

    I like the space for the bird to look into, I wouldn't crop it
  • 09-07-2008, 01:07 PM
    starriderrick
    Re: 1 more for consideration
    The composition works,Pauls comments ring true.Lovely bokeh b.t.w.

    Nice to see new people from the Bay Areasan jose represent !
    Welcome to PR!

    Rick
  • 09-09-2008, 05:48 PM
    dl4449
    Re: 1 more for consideration
    Thank you Paul and Rick
    I agree about the overexposure. This bird was sitting on a deck rail about 4 ft from me trying to eat out of my wifes hand. He was moving fairly fast.Just glad i got the eye clear :lol:
    Troy