Another stab at it

Printable View

  • 07-09-2008, 01:20 PM
    Lori11
    2 Attachment(s)
    Another stab at it
    Ok, Im a glutton for punishment apparently, these any better? :confused:
  • 07-09-2008, 08:15 PM
    AgingEyes
    Re: Another stab at it
    I think the light is a bit harsh. They do look sharp and clear though. And, what is that close to and right behind the flower? :p
  • 07-10-2008, 08:06 AM
    Lori11
    Re: Another stab at it
    That's another flower bud lol My monitor must be off, being on another computer, its harsh to me too
  • 07-10-2008, 08:34 AM
    Loupey
    Re: Another stab at it
    "Punishment"?!? :)

    OK, my 2 pennies: the crop is somewhat "standard" - not real lively. Cover it with shade and go real close or shoot it from afar in a more dynamic composition.

    Look for a side/angle that you haven't seen before.


    I like your tenacity!
  • 07-10-2008, 08:48 AM
    Lori11
    Re: Another stab at it
    Thank God this isnt FILM :lol: I will take some more though :D ( still think I should stick to motorsports, but I'm stubborn LOL)
  • 07-10-2008, 08:55 AM
    Loupey
    Re: Another stab at it
    Perhaps you could take some shots of flower beds as you drive by at 65mph? :p

    Although it would make for an interesting series... call it "life in the fast lane".
  • 07-10-2008, 09:07 AM
    Lori11
    Re: Another stab at it
    :lol: You may be on to something :wink: