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F-15_Flyer
02-21-2005, 01:21 PM
Here's a pic i took at Brandywine Creek State Park, any comments/critique/anything having nothing to do with it welcome! :)

http://www.flyerspage.net/albums/album02/the_walk11.sized.jpg

jar_e
02-21-2005, 01:29 PM
Technically, there's nothing wrong with this shot. Great black and white, and very strong tones. Composition is pretty good, yet my eyes wander too much as there doesn't seem to be a strong enough subject matter here. If it's the road, the main log in the centre is overpowering it.

Just my two cents,

Jared

drjimmy42
02-21-2005, 01:34 PM
Very nice. I like the sun peaking out from behind the tree. However, it seems a bit underexposed, at least on my monitor. Just a touch brighter would bring out some of the texture of the shot.

chandlerjr
02-21-2005, 01:38 PM
Very nice. I like the sun peaking out from behind the tree. However, it seems a bit underexposed, at least on my monitor. Just a touch brighter would bring out some of the texture of the shot.

I agree with you--fix the exposure and you have a great photo. I probably would have metered about have way down the road.

Larry C.

Aaron
02-21-2005, 02:14 PM
Very nice compostion, I feel the lonliness of the road, the isolation of the area - somewhat dark and forboding --- you might be able to brighten it up a tad in post exposure processing.

mtresillian
02-21-2005, 03:42 PM
I also like the photo, but in my humble opinion agree with the exposure comments below. However I think there is a lot of interest in this scene. I like the way the light falls on the empty table and chairs and I think the cobblestone/rocky texture in the forground of the road might add something to the shot. I also enjoy the lonly and empty feel.
Otherwise nice photo!
Michael

F-15_Flyer
02-26-2005, 06:49 PM
hey...sry i've been busy...thx for everyones replies...

On this particular picture i actually wanted to get the dark lonely silhouette feeling.....but i think you guys are right and could use a little bit brightening up. when i have a little more time i'll do that and post it back here.

thx again for the comments made so far.