Portage Place Mall

Never heard of it.

I am not sure I like the palm in front of the water and I sort of wish you could have captured the entire water stream.

This might better taken from a low angle and capturing the entire stream of water as it reaches to the sky.

I don't mind the palm but the washed out windows are too much. If you had moved left or right you could have avoided them. I would also like to see other angles, the low angle in particular sounds interesting. The other suggestion would be to use a longer shutter speed to make the stream more ethereal.

Blown windows and angle of view distract my eye too much.

Len