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jkriminger
01-05-2008, 08:24 AM
I have quite a few to go through..bare with me:D

gahspidy
01-05-2008, 08:52 AM
Lovely scene and nice color. I think this one is missing a strong subject as you had in the last photo you posted in your gallery
http://gallery.photographyreview.com/data/photography//524/medium/cypress21080.jpg

It feels like the sky in the upper right is empty and the fg in the lower left corner is cramped and busy. The shadow area in the middle of the scene is also taking away from a smooth flow into the scene.
Not bad, but not nearly as strong as your last

jkriminger
01-05-2008, 08:58 AM
Agreed, I liked the colors and rock formation but I needed to pull that tree in closer and still it would be ..just ok.. thx for commenting.

MB1
01-07-2008, 05:30 AM
Nice colors but overall it feels like there isn't a subject here and the whole thing seems off kilter/tilted. I'm thinking a square crop just above the main treeline would improve things somewhat.

jkriminger
01-07-2008, 11:25 AM
Thx MB. I gave up on this one because of the lack of a strong focal point. The river curving away gives it that unstraightened look. I think i had flipped this one too..the crop would help..I dont think enough though. Thx for comments.

GB1
01-07-2008, 03:58 PM
Very nice, very clean. Can't say anything bad about it, cept what Gary noted.
GB