So it seems that I haven't posted here in a long time. So maybe I might start agian soon with it being winter and all, but who knows. Only time will tell. Anyways heres my shot.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2177/2149931511_f3a3ece253.jpg

Camera : Nikon D70s
Lens : Nikkor 10.5mm DX Fisheye
Flash : SB-800
Aperture : f/5.6
Shutter Speed : 10 Seconds

Also the person standing in the picture had a speed light set as a slave in his hand.

Welcome back. I like the scene. I think the assistant holding the speedlite should have stood way over to the right and out of the picture. Also, maybe a bit less flash exposure and a tad more exposure. Cropping out the darker area and mound of snow at the right will help.
looking forward to more

I like the scene, too. I don't know much about speedlights or how to control flash but will say it looks tilted but that might be due to perspective.

Oooooo, I like the fisheye distortion but I think you could have moved in on the building some more.

Very nice!!
If you ask me to find something, then I would agree with The Skeptical Photographer though, to get rid of the bright subjects on the very left and the very right.