View Full Version : "Soaring at the Sun" just finished :)


MelissaD
02-03-2004, 05:48 AM
Hi again everyone! I just finally finished this one...been fiddling with it for a while, but I finally like it (whew!). What do you all think?
Thanks everyone,
Mel

natatbeach
02-06-2004, 08:19 AM
at least i don' remember seeing it...will add a critique when i can eyeball it a bit more...

Sebastian
02-06-2004, 08:37 AM
I don't ever comment...there's not much to say.

I don't know how you expect to get critiques for these here since they're so far from still being photos that most of the usual advice doesn't really apply.

Beautiful, creative work though, I enjoy seeing it.

Jezz
02-06-2004, 03:34 PM
i think this my favorite out all the work youve put on here, i do like them all but for some reason this is the best in my opinion. thanks for showing this.
i dont even know what i like about it so much

natatbeach
02-06-2004, 04:06 PM
to this piece is the way you manipulated the "flames and fumes" and how real they look

the sun is oparticularly striking...

I'd like to see more texture in the woman's hair and the proportions on the hands not quite so "deformed"

The colors are rich, and I like the composition and placement of all the elemnets..with those few nitpiks.

regards as always;)

StillMrFitz
02-07-2004, 04:17 AM
Hi again everyone! I just finally finished this one...been fiddling with it for a while, but I finally like it (whew!). What do you all think?
Thanks everyone,
Mel
Hi Melissa

Art is tangible proof of someones imagination at work!!!
Your imagination has been at work!!!

Fitz

Michael Fanelli
02-07-2004, 04:53 AM
Hi again everyone! I just finally finished this one...been fiddling with it for a while, but I finally like it (whew!). What do you all think?
Thanks everyone,
Mel

Very good! Creative, interesting, and engaging. Also, don't worry about the definition of "photograph" that others would love to impose. This work definately belongs here.

MelissaD
02-07-2004, 09:14 PM
A big thanks to everyone for the comments! I'm sorry I haven't been here much this past week, but I'll hang out and post some more comments soon :) I really appreciate it!
Mel