Nikon FA: Ilford Delta 400

Lighting is great! I think it may have been more effective with the model's head in the shot though.

fantastic shot...the lghting couldn't be mor perfect. tasteful and full of beautiful lines. good composition as well....well done

I can see some stuff in the background to the left of the subject, this is very distracting to me. Also you can see the bottom of her hair. I find this less distracting, but quite sloppy. Otherwise this shot is great. Ilford is possibly my favorite film and you have used it beautifully. The lighting could not be more exsquiset.

In my opinion it needs more background separation. This could be a backlight for the left or lighting the background in the opposite direction.